Tuesday, September 2, 2008
to mom
Hi mom this post is for you : there was a girl named Ella and she always tried to do the right thing like get her homework done and do her chores, but one day she was walking down the road when she met a man named Nick he stared to talk to her and tried to get her to do bad thing like get on bad sites . She tried to get away but she always would come back cuz it felt good to do bad things she dident know why but it did so this went on for about a month when her loving mother fond her doing theas things she help her stop but once agin she some how got back in troble but she never stop trying so as life went on she met a guy that changd her life his name was Jesus he told her about God and how much he loved her she told him all the bad stuff that she had done and he told her that she was forgiven , so now a days she always prays to God for help when she needs it and she even met a grate guy named jeff who loved God and told her all about him he told her how he help other people even him he told Ella his story and that he had never told anyone ,so Jeff and Ella desited to get marred and are still together to this day and live happily ever after . I made this story up but it has some of my life in it .It still need some work but you tell me what you think love ya
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2 comments:
Nice, very nice. I do like it and understood that some of it included you. All good stories have some personal experiences, that's what makes them more real and intriguing. (interesting but a little more) So, as any writer will tell you-you write the story the editor makes some suggestions on improvements. The writing process is long but very rewarding.
Good job elise.
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